Improvement Plan

I talked with Nicole Seo and Sukari Stone. I didn't follow all of their suggestions, but here are the ones that I did follow:

• Try different colours for the bubbles because they blend it too much with the background at certain parts.
• Increase the line height.
• Think about how much of the lyrics I want the viewer to see at first glance through the viewport. Try making the first verse end right above the bottom of the viewport.
• Align certain stanzas differently.

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